I have two for yous (FFG). Both in this chapter.

1) A clarity issue. Page 32, In the Example Obligation Check…. last paragraph, second sentence. Lowhhrick needs to be added to "Oskara and Pash". He is identified as a subject in the former paragraphs, but ignored in this paragraph. It's common sense to add him, but a person "new" to role playing may be confused or take the text as "the Word of God".

2) the Week one update- page 1, Chapter II: Creating a Character: Assembling the Group's Obligation (page 31). You suggest that the obligation be assembled from highest to lowest. If you add this to the book, your examples on pages 31 and 32 should reflect this. They don't!

Hope it helps.
 

 Smuggler: Scoundrel: 15XP Side Step talent

It reads, "Once per round, may perform a side step maneuve…" Maneuver is missing the 'r' at the end.

-EF

Hi:

The section on Obligation is on page 30, not in page 29, like it states on page 28.

L
 

 Ok, my turn!

Explorer: Scout p.50

A replacement skill for the removed Surveillance skill should be provided.

Hired Gun: Marauder p54

Minor typo: The bonus career skill Resiliece should be Resilience.

Technician: Slicer p.63

Minor typo: The bonus career skill Knowledge (Eductation) sould be (Education)

p.66 

Im not sure if its because of space issues but I think table 2-5 should be called table 2-6 and come after the Random Motivation table.